Photographer's Note
Praia Grande em Arraial do Cabo - Rio de Janeiro
Mitsubishi Pajero TR4
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Sharpshooter (61) 2009-02-18 19:05 [Comment]
BenKovski
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(1077) 2009-02-20 10:34
Hello Alexandre,
I think I got the idea - the machine versus the elements. But i have some remarks and suggestions:
Crop is too tight - I would make it wider so we have the three elements - air, water and earth in equal proportion in the picture. A higher POV would also help
Second, the eyes are following the car direction and it leeds us... out of the picture. That is wrong. I would put the car in the primary visual zone on the left of the picture, heading against the cloud.
And last - the horizon is tilted. There are few ways to get it straighten
Anyway, I'll give you points for your eye. Well seen
Cheers!
Ben
Photo Information
- Copyright: Alexandre Oliveira (aoliveira_bra) (41)
- Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2006-12-16
- Categories: Natureza
- Camera: cannon EOS 350D digital
- Exposição: f/8, 1/200 segundos
- More Photo Info: view
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original
- Date Submitted: 2009-02-18 13:43
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by aoliveira_bra, last updated 2009-02-20 10:48
