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Photographer's Note
Two girls on the Ipanema beach. Look at the the man on the right starting at them
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(9576) 2004-09-25 5:19
I like the colors and the contrst between them.Good POV,framing and prespective.
aella
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(117) 2004-09-25 11:36
Nice picture, but it feels a little tilted. At first I thought the image could benefit from a rotation, then I realized the horizon is indeed straight - it's the sand that slopes up to the left or the perspective that suggests it. Still, that's a little unsettling.
Also, maybe a cropping would be nice if you want to focus the scene on the girls and the man watching it.
I've suggested a workshop.
Cathy
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(335) 2004-10-15 23:49
I love the blue, blue ocean and the layout of the photo (the girls on the left and the mountain and the man on the right.
Well done.
I look forward to seeing more of your pictures on TE
mdchachi
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(1612) 2004-11-03 8:53
Nice composition with the cliffs dominating the right side and the girls on the left. I would be tempted to clone out the other people.
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Photo Information
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Copyright: Nicolas Gouble (gouble)
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(259) - Genre: Pessoas
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2004-07-01
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Camera: Canon Ixus 400
- Exposição: f/13.0, 1/200 segundos
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
- Tema(s): Beach Walkers and Runners, Beach Views, photos named after a movie/song/play/book quote, Brasil - brasileiros, beach, plage [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2004-09-25 5:06
