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Photographer's Note
Early morning on Lake Michigan as Gale winds roar. Black frame is from slide from scanner. Velvia 50 Slide film. Whatcha think?
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PeskyPolecat
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(0) 2004-01-19 3:22
I like the composition, you have timed it well to get the spray. In my opinion the scan is a little soft, which detracts from the visual appeal, and I would have cropped the slide edge off, straightened it all and maybe added a narrower border.
korneliy (10) 2004-01-19 4:04
Something wrong with your scanner. Can you rescan slide? Velvia is a great film, photo would be very interesting and impressive
avigur_11
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(22553) 2004-01-19 5:17
I think it's very nice, John. I like the sky and the clouds, and the well timed water spray. I agree with the others about the scan, but I still think it deserves a smiley, Smiley :-}
mortijo
(12828) 2004-01-19 5:37
Yes, well..scanner problem or not, there is nothing wrong with your timing. Great sky, great motion in the water., great composition.
wtolyz
(20) 2004-01-19 14:10
Interesting perspective and good framing. Great natural atmosphere. Very nice detail, well seen and shot. Good eye and well done
vesalius
(861) 2005-06-22 23:28
Hi John,
This photo is nicely captured. Looks like a postcard. The composition is not bad. Thanks,
Don
Photo Information
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Copyright: John Black (smiley)
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(613) - Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2003-11-00
- Categories: Natureza
- Camera: Nikon N65, Tamron 75-300
- Exposição: f/5.6
- Details: Tripod: Yes
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
- Tema(s): Lighthouses on the Great Lakes [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2004-01-19 3:01
