Photographer's Note
Not having much luck with the Tower. Only 2 points so far. I try this one from Lake Ontario having a nautical flavour. Perhaps you like this better.
Due to critique, I cleaned up the 'dirt' at top and re-posting it.
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Flavia
(10352) 2006-10-15 13:19
Hi Janos,
This is sure a much better POV and composition. The panel on the foregroung add interest and deepht to the pictures. Colors are nice too. It's still a little noisy, but nothing to serious.
Regards,
Flavia
stego
(24132) 2006-11-02 21:50
Hi Janos,
This is my favourite of your portfolio. It's a very nice strengthful and vibrant compo. Those triangles go very well with the tower, itself a triangle and the contrast of colors is very nice. The unreally saturated colors fit well in this photo, even though generally I don't like them. The same for the grain.
I took a look at your portfolio and I find several interesting photos, but (I hope you don't take it badly) I must confess that too frequently they are technically poor and that fact makes them less interesting and less prone to atract critiques. Another issue that doesn't help you on that is your notes not saying much about the places. I refer this because you seem interested in getting your posts critiqued (as we all in TE) and because the most common thought that comes to my mind when I see your photos is "if it wasn't this, if it was that, etc., it would be great". Common problems are exposure, sharpness/focus and over saturation. I guess your artistic work in digital manipulation is interfering with your 'success' here in TE.
Cheers.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Janos Gardonyi (paprika-jancsi)
(2349)
- Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2005-09-00
- Categories: Arquitectura
- Camera: Canon PowerShot S400
- Versão da Foto: Final Version, Versão Original
- Tema(s): Toronto -cityscapes and life [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2006-10-15 12:41
Discussions
- To Flavia: ...proper appreciation (1)
by paprika-jancsi, last updated 2006-10-15 03:46 - To stego: need a better camera...... (4)
by paprika-jancsi, last updated 2006-11-03 09:47