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Women and school girls pass each other in the narrow streets of the old city.
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(1216) 2009-04-29 14:43
Hello Simon,
This was well seen -- an interesting and thought-provoking contrast, but I think it would be stronger if you showed less of the street and focused on the figures (as I suggest in a workshop).
A tighter frame also draws attention to the fascinating patterns in the paving stones -- do they have meaning?
Regards,
Mary
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Copyright: simon tyne (sigur)
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(338) - Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2009-02-10
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Exposição: f/7.1, 1/250 segundos
- More Photo Info: view
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2009-04-29 0:28
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Points: 1
