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Photographer's Note
night exposure in tel-aviv.
ps work:auto colour,levels,sharp +neatimage
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(0) 2003-07-22 5:11
Interesting shot, Daniel. I myself have something for long exposure night shots. This one is done well, but I find that the bike is a bit too overpowering in the composition, seems to take up too much space as well as being cut off at the top a bit. A fine shot nonetheless.
SirWilliam
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(410) 2003-07-22 5:32
nice point of shooting. But the billboard in the background and the car on the left are , imho, unwanted visitors to your photo. They distract the eye too much. Increase some tention by cropping the wheel on the right a little bit.
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(693) 2003-07-22 5:50
Very nice shot indeed, there's multiple shadows going on with the bike, I like the starburst effect on the lamp nearest, and the car lights look like glowing metal.
Edwin
(188) 2003-07-22 6:11
I agree with Willem regarding the unwanted visitors. However by elaminating the car out of your frame the bike becomes much more a main subject... Cycling this bike on your Road of Happiness seems rather painful to me regarding the lack of a saddle ;) A very nice shot Daniel!
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(4032) 2003-07-22 7:19
The idea was good, I like the angle, but the composition doesn't work. Billboard is really disturbing the image and the top framing is too tight...
htremblay
(1666) 2003-07-22 8:58
Superbe, je trouve cette photo parfaite. Elle me plait énormément. Bravo.
Superb, I find this perfect photo. It pleases me enormously. Bravo.
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(582) 2003-07-22 10:18
Very nice Daniel! I love youor photo, its a great composition with beautiful colors and shines.
Congratulations
thien
(2112) 2003-07-22 22:35
Very nice angle of shot. I find here that the bike is the main subject and the lights is just a background item and as such it is very well done. The car is a bit unfortunate. A good shot but not your best.
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Photo Information
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Copyright: daniel lavi (evilren)
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(1395) - Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2003-00-00
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Camera: Canon EOS 300, 28-105 f/3.5-f/4.5, @ ISO 200
- Exposição: f/9.6, 3 segundos
- Details: Tripod: Yes
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original
- Tema(s): Night Shots, Bicycles [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-07-22 4:46
- Favoritos: 1 [ver]
