Photographer's Note
Taken when I walked down the stairs..followed my previous uploading. Thanks for looking.
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holmertz
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(102604) 2015-12-14 10:04
Hello Jasmine,
Today we are neighbors on TE, but your photo is much more sophisticated. This is an excellent composition of the two persons walking in different directions in the spiral staircase. I love the way the girl is standing, leaning on the railing and looking down. The fine greyscale is very attractive.
Kind regards,
Gert
No_One
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(4) 2015-12-14 10:20
Hi Jasmine
This looks to me like a high art fashion shot , it screams class and that particular moment of perfect photography . A fantastic example of candid photography and all the more so in your well chosen mono format
Thanks add always
Noel
BennyV
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(34748) 2015-12-14 11:43
Wow, congratulations! This is an absolutely terrific shot. The play of lines reminds me of seventies op art, and I love that hint of drama in the interaction (or lack thereof) between the two characters. Expert piece of work! Hats off from me!!
Benny
emka
(158030) 2015-12-15 0:03
Hello Jasmine, Attractive [email protected] composition, well seen scene on the stairs. Nice contrasts.
WArm regard s MAlgo
snunney
(130967) 2015-12-15 2:24
Hello Jasmine,
Fine presentation in black and white. I like the juxtaposition between the two girls with the uppermost one seemingly undetermined whether to go up or down.
ourania
(51103) 2015-12-15 14:39
Hello Jasmine,
a superb combination of architecture and human interest. The scene looks spontaneous, it is a decisive moment, like a sudden twist in the regular flow of patterns and movement in this setting. I like very much the full frame, the downward point of view and the rhythmical dynamism contrasted by the ascending woman's reaction. The monochrome is elegant and enhances the graphic aspect of the scene. Congratulations and thank you!
All the best, have a good night,
Ourania
mjw364
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(1466) 2015-12-16 4:53
Hello Jasmine
Intelligent shot and use of high contrast technique. Very well composed image. It's amazing. Well done.
Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comment.
Have a good day.
Mike
willperrett
(14215) 2015-12-31 11:12
Hello Jasmine
This is a fine image, honestly worth more attention than it's so far received. I love the high-key exposure (not over-exposure, as witnessed by the deep blacks in the girl's trousers). And the position and attitude of the two figures seems to want to tell a story... Why is the younger girl looking back? Does she know the other person? Intriguing and beautifully shot.
Wishing you a very Happy New Year.
Regards
Will
Matyas
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(0) 2016-01-02 1:37
Hello Jasmine! Wonderful take. Fine two women. Fine scene. Good high point of view. Superb exposure and capture. Original BW image. Sophisticated effect. Well done!
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jasmine Wang (Tigerlily)
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(3381) - Genre: Pessoas
- Medium: Preto & Branco
- Date Taken: 2014-04-29
- Categories: Momento Decisivo
- Exposição: f/9.0, 1/200 segundos
- More Photo Info: view
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original
- Date Submitted: 2015-12-14 9:50
