Photographer's Note
Esta imagen fué tomada en unos de los muchos miradores que posee el Puerto de la Cruz (Tenerife), el día nublado y el mar ligeramente picado invitaba a relajarse mirando esta inmensidad que nos brinda la naturaleza.
Me decidí por una abertura de diafragma abierta con la intención de emborronar el fondo y dar mas protagonismo a la joven de la imagen, quise dar un efecto a dos capas como en los retratos, lo único que me disgusta de esta imagen es la línea del horizonte a la altura de la cabeza, pero no se puede tener todo.
Espero que os guste.
Saludos
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sabyasachi1212
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(19779) 2006-06-27 15:16
Hi Jose,
I do not understand your language but I perfectly understand the language of your photograph. You have captutred a pensive moment with effortless ease. Shallow DOF does the rest of the trick.
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi
pau
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(792) 2006-06-27 17:32
Hola Jose!
Bonita imagen. Aparte de las sensaciones que da...de nostalgia y tranquilidad, encuentro muy acertado el blanco y negro. Una composición simple pero bonita.
Saludos!
Pau
feather
(51130) 2006-06-28 2:44
There's a sense of poignancy that you have captured here or even sadness. The girl could be dreaming of a lost love. You composed her in the best place to the left and she appears to be looking across the frame towards the right which makes the shot easy on the eye and so "right".
jinju
(14265) 2006-06-28 3:30
I also dont understand the note, and maybe thats good. These sorts of photos need to be taken in on our own without "guidance". Not like a photo of a buildong, this one deals more with emotions and telling a story. And I want to form my own judgement on what its telling me. I sense loneliness, pain, sadness but also hope over the horizon. A beautiful and sensitive photo, well composed.
smarrero
(530) 2006-06-28 6:09
Hola Jose,
muy buena foto. La técnica, excelente. Muy buena eleccion abrir el diafragma para desenfocar el fondo. Has conseguido una muy buena composición. Yo no veo problema en la linea del horizonte como comentas en tu nota. Espero más fotos tuyas dentro de poco.
Gracias por compartir la foto.
Sergio.
jhm
(211736) 2006-07-01 1:47
Hi Jose,
I'm agree with Sabyasachi, I do not understand your language but I perfectly understand the language of your photograph. A moment of consideration for this lady, certainly through the black and white structure, indeed infinite far.
Have a nice weekend,
John.
gebala
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(0) 2006-07-01 4:18
hello,
I like this composition much
great romanctic and nostalgic mood we can find here
this woman is like a dreamer
I like it much
rgs
later;)
rahul__rahul__
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(2250) 2006-07-01 13:37
Hi Jose
nice picture, I like the darkness in this and the b/w is good. The silhouette of that person is also nice.
Good job.
TFS
Rahul
coco
(30439) 2006-07-01 18:57
Hola Jose.
Tenía abierta esta foto antes de tu crítica (por lo que me alegra la coincidencia).
La foto es fantástica.
Es tan sencilla, tan directa, tan frágil, tan sincera.
Un muy buen trabajo.
Carlos
alvaraalto
(42804) 2006-07-06 17:28
Hi Jose,
Beautiful picture with great expression. Black & White is an excellent choice here. The composition is beautiful and almost classical.
Groet Rob
yanseiler
(20) 2006-07-18 2:59
Hi Jose, I like this one which make our imagination working, what is she thinking about, what happened ? I like your composition, it is well balanced with the small parts for the sky and the wall...
Cheers
Yan
erinn
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(58) 2006-07-19 4:31
Hola Jose!
Me gusta mucho esta foto en blanco y negro, pues creo que da mas emotividad a la imagen. Casi puedo entrar en los pensamientos de esta mujer que pierde su mirada en la inmensidad del mar. Felicidades!. Saludos.
Erinn.
rozy975
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(3047) 2006-07-29 16:48
Loneliness in this picture is tangible in my opinion.
B&W is a great choice.
Well done!
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jose Garcia (balatrek)
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(7455) - Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Preto & Branco
- Date Taken: 2002-00-00
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Camera: Minolta 500Si, Tamron 28-200mm
- Exposição: f/5.6, 1/60 segundos
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original
- Date Submitted: 2006-06-27 14:42
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by balatrek, last updated 2006-06-28 03:18
