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Photographer's Note
Children playing with kites at the Puri Beach in the last lights of the day.
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thierry37
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(669) 2007-01-08 9:32
J'ai apprécié l'ambiance de votre photo.
Je me suis permis d'y apporter quelques modifications dans le workshop, j'espère que cela vous plaira
bonne année
thierry
arindam_thokder
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(3987) 2007-01-08 10:59
Good play of focus. I would like to include the boy in the right also in the frame or cut him totally.
s10001in
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(0) 2007-01-17 19:28
Arnab..
this is awesome..
I mean this is really beautiful photo.
But Firki(Chakkri or Wheel to wind the MANJA) is at proper position & covering left part of screen.
Boy with kite is interesting..& his kite with motion blur..really looks great but as I more towards right side of the frame..anoth kid..may be with another kite or whatever it may be..
I prefer to have it more in frame..
Because left side of the frame is exceptionally open or blank..
& sure his addition will enhance the look & interest of total frame..
nice work arnab..
keep it up..
Photo Information
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Copyright: Arnab Thokder (arnab_thokder)
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(63) - Genre: Pessoas
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2006-11-14
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-01-08 6:52
Discussions
- To arindam_thokder: Cutting a boy at right (1)
by s10001in, last updated 2007-01-17 07:32
