Photographer's Note
These children live in the edge of the city, they should go to school as the city's children, but without more money, now they have to spend their energy on copying aduit dancing Disco.
I also have another view in the WS!
lestans marcou esta nota como útil
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don_narayan
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(2014) 2005-09-19 9:49
Hello Mingfang! Very cool photo! I like that you have the boy in the middle dancing and the 2 on the side, it makes a good frame... even better with the big smile in the corner. It is not so sharp but I think it is good like that. very good job!
Kenny10pin
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(19301) 2005-11-09 11:29
very good story here, it is a shame that they are all so dirty, but I guess it is life in some parts of the world, however they all seem to be enjoying themselves, good shot
banyanman
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(7797) 2005-11-13 9:09
You have broken all the 'rules' here about cutting off heads and cropping through faces, Mingfang, but nevertheless your composition works quite well and keeps the focus on the boy dancing in the middle. You've successfully conveyed a feeling of action and happiness in this shot. My only criticism would be that it could be sharper. Cheers . . . David
lestans
(17258) 2006-02-06 4:29
I always read your notes, Mingfang, before looking at the photo! So I "feel" better the meaning. I appreciate here the composisione, cropping bodies and heads and focusing on the kid in center of the pic; but I fell a sense of sadness in this dance, since these poor kids will not study and enjoy their life in this simple stupid way.
I like the "smile" in the top left!! A smile without eyes!
Livia
Photo Information
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Copyright: Mingfang Hg (Mingfang)
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(1415) - Genre: Pessoas
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2000-07-00
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Camera: Nikon FM2, AF Nikon 28mm, Kodak EliteChrome100
- Exposição: f/5.6, 1/60 segundos
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
- Tema(s): Children of the World, Chinese children [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2005-09-19 5:03
