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omerozden 2009-04-14 5:13
hello lauryn,
you captured a significant moment.
he completely concentrated what he is writing.
i like the scene very much.
however i would try to drive the attention more to his hands and face.
warm regards,
omer
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04-14-2009, 01:34 PM
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To omerozden: WS
Yes, as you showed, if I could focus more on his face, and cropped other parts, it would have been better. I don't like cropping off so I uploaded the entire image anyway.
But it isn't bad to crop off the unecessary parts. It's needed sometimes. I just wish that I could decide the frames(how to slice off the scenery in a picture frames) in a quick second, so just to improve it, I don't crop any parts of the pictures I upload on TE. Thank you so much for taking time for me. Your idea was very very useful! Lauryn 
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