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ASURA figenya
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2010-03-13 5:13] Hi Figen,
You are up there with the best on this site. This is a remarkable photograph. I do not feel that your post-processing does it justice, but this does not take anything away from the image for me. |
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NYCscapes 4 brandstaetter
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2010-03-13 4:58] [ +] Absolutely wonderful.. It is just perfect. Are these residential buildings? Ir are they offices? Would be very interesting to see this at different times of the day. I am also keen to see how good the detail is if you zoom into one of the windows..would you mind posting one to teh workshop for me please? |
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As time goes by_Eminonu figenya
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2010-03-08 6:15] Hi Figenya,
Thank you for your comment earlier. You have inspired me to write something back..
I just read your note that you are trying to make wider frames... I feel that this is an excellent attempt. The lines and angles work very well - they are all converging to the same point and it makes the image strong. You have some wide-angle distortion going on..but I think it adds to the effect of the lines. I would be very happy with this.
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memories markoci
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2010-02-13 14:24] [ +] Hi Mark,
Lovely to see you post on here after so long... a lovely portrait - very sensitive. Cant help noticing how nice this is technically too. The focus seems to be just where it needs to be, without being too sharp. The overall details of hair, clothing and necklace is subtle, yet clear.. |
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In the eye of King poocha
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2008-05-14 14:07] very difficult to get details when you have such extremes of dark and light - well done. |
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Durian seller selling durians Sascha
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2008-05-14 14:04] Nice picture with beautiful textures - no need for the partial treatment.. I think it would have looked just great without it.. |
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RICCI E POVERI serp2000
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2008-03-25 11:07] [ +] A good representation of the thought... |
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IT IS LUCK close2eye (9)
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2008-03-25 11:04] [ +] Hi Ghanshyam,
This picture speaks for itself.. A profound and telling situation. It is an issue, very close to my own heart.. It would be nice to see you nurture this ability to tell a story through your image.. Continue on this thread.. |
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Grencsó Bio Kollektív nygus
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2008-01-28 16:11] ???????????? |
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Human footprint on Earth Prisley
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2008-01-28 13:07] [ +] Hi Prisley,
Thank you very much for all of your thoughts on my work. I appreciate the time which you took to look at them.
Ok, I took a look through your photographs and from the words which you wrote to me, I can see that you are here to learn. Therefore, I will go ahead and tell you exactly what I feel whilst looking through your gallery.
This is the one which stood out the most. As Brenden noted, it is difficult to fully appreciate your vision around this image, as it is mostly someone else's work. What I think is quite nice is the potential story behind what you are showing. I must admit though, it falls just a little short, as did need to read your note before fully understanding what it was you were trying to tell me. The title is a little misguiding, as I was expecting a footprint. The shadow of a man, well.. doesn't look quite like a shadow of a man.. at least not enough to make me really stop and *think* about the issue which you are presenting to me.
The storytelling is a strength here.. |
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dog sohrab
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2008-01-15 8:28] coooool! You seem to be in a much better place than last year, personally, I mean. Like you have been able to let go of something. Dare I say it, less anal about your approach. I don't always get what you are trying to tell me, but you always make me think!!
how are you anyway? did you change your number? |
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a cold night in Cardiff maciekda
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-12-13 2:32] I really like your choice of post processing here - There is something really nice about the way the two girls are so prominent in the scene. I like the inclusion of the (ever present) roadworks plastic things.. I think it is a little empty on that side even though you have that couple walking through the area. |
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oasis sohrab
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-12-12 2:50] only you could carry this off - love it. |
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Waiting For Mom terriwu (47)
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-12-08 15:18] excellent! |
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Youth nicoz
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-12-07 16:54] [ +] Hi Nicolas,
Thank you for bringing this picture to my attention through the "Furachan" discussion. Its certainly a beautiful picture - whether it fits into the bracket of "street photography".. who knows. Its all subjective, every bit of it. Who am I to tell you whether this is a street photograph or anything else for that matter. I can tell you what I see, or what I feel you think it is.. or even what I would like it to be. Other than this, it is partly my imagination which makes it what it is - after all, I am only seeing a selective view of what you saw. Keep thinking how you are thinking.. works for me.
its beautiful... |
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-11-28 3:34] I see you are continuing on your black and white journey, searching for the rays of light.. This could easily pass as a Trente Park(sp?) image. Its bustling with energy.. very nice indeed.. |
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National Women's Day of Protest RandomCameraGuy
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-11-05 11:41] I think Luis's workshop adds the required dramatic effect. Considering the subject, it somehow draws my attention to the people straight away, instead of to the writing, which by the way is nice. Blue and yellow - always a good combination. The slight vignetting is also perfect, just closing everything in. |
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Flower Girl Darren
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-11-05 11:33] I was just admiring the tones and texture of this photograph - they are just beautiful. Adds so much to the atmosphere - kind of cold actually, but really nice and inviting nevertheless.
I think your older photographs have a certain feel about them - quite different to more recent ones, which are somehow "cleaner".. not sure if I am making any sense.. |
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Waiting for a train ninaL
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-11-05 11:29] I think this is really lovely, but I would really like to an indication that you are on the train... This might have given a little more strength to the image, and you could have chosen a different title, leaving more for the imagination.
I think this would have worked equally well with the focus on the lady. Lovely autumnal colours. |
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kajspice
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 63 N: 762]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif) (4542) [ 2007-10-27 14:36] [ +] wow! what a beautiful image..
(I must come back and critique this picture properly..)
edit.
Hiya,
Sorry for the delayed reply. As promised, I'm back.. yes.. thats me on Lightstalkers, though I must admit I am not making the best use out of that website. I tried looking for you on there, to no avail. Anyhow, back to the picture -I would not change a single thing. The focus is superb.. the sweeping peacock feathers add a beautiful touch.
a joyful image.. |
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