Fotos

     Matthew-Watt (4467) 2007-12-25 3:25

Hello again Adam,

Following on form my previous critique, I think this image possesses plenty of potential; it has a good subject, a plethora of attractive colours and reasonable lighting with a better-than-average background. What needs attention is the angle of horizon; it needs to be as level as possible. Also, give the photo a sharpen, to define the edges and to counteract the soft look. Try to include the girls elbow and the bottom of the red bucket in the frame. Important parts of the subject should not be forgotten! Position the view point behind the girl to block out that person in the background who detracts between the girls chin and toys. Changing a few small things can vastly improve the overall result.

Matt