Photographer’s Note
a girl living in a house run by HOPE organization for children taken from the street
the third issue of NEED magazine is out, you can find there my story about HOPE organization helping children in Kolkata
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Luciano75
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(0) 2007-10-04 3:57
Hello Maciej
I am wondering always when I see such a framings,how you people can see this...a wall painted with HOPE and a little girl near.I think it`s a excellent documentary/street shot,well composed.My applause for this.TFS
Regards,
Lucian
nostromo47
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(737) 2007-10-04 3:59
Hi Maciej,
splendid shot!! Nice color and composition. It reminds me to one of my firts uploaded on TE. TFS
Best regards.
Luko
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(13896) 2007-10-04 4:06
So you've became a regular NEED contributor... WHich country will they send you to now?
This shot is ok, although with a strange greenish neonlight cast that you somehow tried to address on a "regular" exposure basis, I wonder whether something more daring on exposure (ie. darker) wouldn't have suit better fo r the atmosphere.
I must say I prefer MrBialy's take on the same subject, I am slightly bothered with the totally empty space on the right + rule of thirds portrait.
SandROM (19) 2007-10-04 4:11 [Comment]
Furachan
(0) 2007-10-04 4:24
Yeah. Great shot, Maciej, the colors, the timing, the irony of the writing on the wall and the girl's expression, everything single thing fits.
Nice one...
Francis
partha
(13667) 2007-10-04 5:49
Terrific shot. U have used the writing HOPE and the expression so wonderfully. It surely gives the very good presence of mind u have as well as the sweet timing.
Regards.
Partha
servane
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(629) 2007-10-04 5:52
Hello Maciej
Very good shot and perfect composition.
It's a little movie in only one picture.
Thank you for sharing
Servane
michiels
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(4170) 2007-10-04 5:57
hello Maciej,
Very symbolic photo ! the compo is "simple" and that makes the message stronger. It's perfect that the girl closes her eyes. Congrats with the Need-reportage !!!
greetings, inn
Darren
(6819) 2007-10-04 7:00
Hi Maciek. This shot is pretty good, although maybe not as adventurous as I expect from you. Two things do bother me. First, the color is bad. She is greenish. I don't know why, but it seems your colors have been off on many of your last uploads, yet I always remember you as someone who had great colors before. I wonder what has changed. Second, I don't like that bluish U at the top right. I wouldn't have minded had you composed so that it wasn't in the shot.
Congrats on your further work with NEED; you are keeping some very good company there.
bwiti
(402) 2007-10-04 8:54
This is a scene full of power... I like the attitude of the kid and the sweet and glaucous ambient tints so congratulations and sorry for my poor english...
Galeota
(10334) 2007-10-04 11:07
Hey Maciej, it's always a pleasure to see you around, even though I can understand you've prefered changing neighbourhood considering your exceptional talent (I mean the will, and need, to broaden your horizons). I like the plain message in here and am not particularly bothered by the green cast. Be well.
Framboisilla
(5402) 2007-10-04 11:08
Hi Maciej,
Beautiful idea for this composition. I like especially the little girl's attitude.
Regards,
Stéphanie.
ndb1958
(9248) 2007-10-04 13:44
Wonderful shot, Maciej. Facial- and bodyexpression of the little girl is great. There is much room for different interpretations ...
"hope" written at the wall is wonderful.
I envy you for this shot ... up to my favorits ... and thank you for sharing. Nino
bapun1
(803) 2007-10-04 13:51
Very nice to combine " what is written on the wall is what is going in her mind"
The impact is brilliant.
As it is with the tap, hope should not run out of this sweet little girl.
TFS.
Bishnu.
atlantida
(2323) 2007-10-04 15:39
Very touchy, it gives me shudders. This photo is so perfect, I just cant comment it, it has a story that it;s beyond everything I can say. I hope for this little girl to have a better life.
Gordana
jjcordier
(25164) 2007-10-04 21:42
Maciej
Une jolie composition et des tons d'image particuliers qui donnent de la force à la photo. J'aime beaucoup les clichés de ton reportage pour NEED magazine qui ont un impact très important.
Amicalement
JJ
faubry
(32409) 2007-10-05 1:08
bonjour Maciej, i am very happy see yourphoto again since a long time less.... you come back with a powerful image...a lot emotion here, i havnt enought anglish words for write more... thanks for sharing with us this shot
soon
francine
nicoz
(1963) 2007-10-05 2:17
Hi Maciej,
...........and breathe... I like this photo, the emotional content of it. It makes even more sense when reading the note. It's simple and speaks to me. The colors are kinda weird, but it works somehow in creating this atmosphere.
Well done!
Nicolas
eleparc
(24059) 2007-10-05 5:15
I do like this shot Maciek! although i was a bit surprised too by the greenish tint. reading your answer to Luko, i do understand why now... a very simple and down to the point shot!
Eric
AnimeshRay
(8886) 2007-10-06 10:06
A fantastic image and powerful documentary/illustrative work, Maciej! And thanks for the link.
Sure there is the green cast, but it has become part of the darker mood in contrast the warmer color of "HOPE"
Animesh
Paul65
(1402) 2007-10-16 4:54
Dobre zdjêcie, jak wydaje mi siê oddaje klimat tego miejsca. Dziewczynka w perkalowej sukience mo¿e kojarzyæ siê z egzotycznymi miejscami dla nas Europejczyków.
Dobra robota.
Dpbours
(220) 2007-10-23 0:39
Hi Maciej,
Wow, amazingly powerful shot! Very very strong and a pleasure on the eye. Congratualtions!!
Greetings, Dennis
mim_i
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(370) 2007-11-14 12:32
Just wonderful composition!
You've got the right moment... there is so much emotion in this photo...!
TFS,
Mimi
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Photo Information
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Copyright: Maciej Dakowicz (maciekda)
(19599)
- Genre: Pessoas
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2007-03-24
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Canon EF 35mm f/2
- Exposição: f/6.3, 1/320 segundos
- More Photo Info: view
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original
- Tema(s): India, Devimeuxbe's favorites on TE (II) [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2007-10-04 3:49
- Favoritos: 4 [ver]
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