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The pier


The pier
Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Yitzhak Avigur (avigur_11) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4690 W: 1543 N: 3031] (21138)
Género: Lugares
Meio: Cor
Data da Foto: 2004-03-06
Categorias: Natureza, Arquitectura
Câmara: Olympus C-720
Exposição: f/6.3, 1/640 segundos
Versão da Foto: Versão Original
Tema(s): Winter beach scenes [view contributor(s)]
Data de Submissão: 2004-03-07 3:32
Visto: 889
Pontos: 44
[Notas - Normas] Nota do Artista
The old port of Tel Aviv.
The sea was very high and stormy yesterday, but the sun was shining and there was excellent light.
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  • Great 
  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9485 W: 448 N: 15093] (52924)
  • [2004-03-07 3:34]

Great composition Yitzhak,

Great colours too, It's realy a goog photo you let us see. The word I used is great.
Very well done, bravo.

very dynamic scene, beautifully composed, I really like all this foam and those blues.. I think the frame shouldn't be blue - i'd make it white i think... anyway, very nice picture

Nice yitzhak. Simple but great image. I know that a lot don't share my views about framing, but I have to say that I am always bothered by coloured frames. For me it transforms an image into a decorative piece.

Un ocean de bleu énérvé et cette avancée qui vient perturber les vagues comme un défi de l'homme face à la mer !
Le cadrage est très bon et les élément bien en place.

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  • Ebbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2752 W: 784 N: 1917] (9515)
  • [2004-03-07 4:21]

Lovely compositon Yitzhak! And to me another proof that concrete is not really a perfect material in hot and salt enviroments.....

  • Great 
  • JudyH Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 304 W: 91 N: 146] (700)
  • [2004-03-07 4:53]

This picture is very "alive". The frame compliments it very well too. I like the old and weathered appearance of the old port amongst the waves, and you have done well to capture the different colour of the stormy sea - it has that natural green tint to it. Well done.

Another great straightforward seaside composition, Yitzhak. The dynamics of the waves is captured just the way it should be, and the colors and contrast are fine also. I agree with Ebbe's observation that the concrete piece doesn't seem to resist the force of nature perfectly well here. Good shot.

Very nice picture of a stormy sea. The variation of the colours of the sea is grandiose.

  • Great 
  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 890 W: 247 N: 24] (292)
  • [2004-03-07 5:53]

I like the motion in the sea in this picture Yitzhak. If i concentrate i can hear the waves as the come crashing in. Very simple but lovely seen. This is one of my favroite moods of the sea, whe it shows it's power.

Belle presentation ou il ne manque ici que le bruit du ressac.C'est bien vu et bien presenté Yitzhak bravo

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2980 W: 89 N: 4012] (21348)
  • [2004-03-07 10:29]

The surge of wave, the battered port...they make a very metaphorical shot. The clarity of the shot is refreshing to the yes. Thanks for sharing this. A darket of brighter frame could have enhanced this scenery.

Very nice simple shot. The waves look great crashing against the pier. Something not quite right about the frame on this one I think.

  • Great 
  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12520 W: 269 N: 16548] (66166)
  • [2004-03-07 14:39]

Lovely composition Yitzhak! It's realy a goog photo you let us see. Very well done, good work.

  • Great 
  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6304 W: 3307 N: 7714] (28612)
  • [2004-03-08 1:51]

Lumière latérale + mer agitée = excellentes photos. Très bonne composition et je suis très intéressé par ce genre d'images.

Side light + rough sea = excellent photographs. Very good composition and I am very interested by this kind of pictures.

Crashing waves against the barrier ..... I feel like I am almost there too. Good action shot with the wave spray ebbing off from the wood. Well done.

  • Great 
  • orme Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2014 W: 139 N: 1496] (6586)
  • [2004-03-08 23:54]

A beautiful composition, Yitzhak. The colours and lighting are excellent. I like the way you have captured four sets of waves. Well framed.

It is true the light is good after the bad weather, a sharp sky what makes it possible to have a clean image like that, good framing and pretty colors.

  • Great 
  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5484 W: 506 N: 7209] (32731)
  • [2004-03-12 5:03]

Excellent shot where the tundering sea captured in the great light gives a very dynamic and interesting picture

Superbe restitution de la mer déchaînée venant frapper sans relâche la jetée.
Magnifiques couleurs de la mer et de la jetée avec son aspect rouillé.
Très bien fait Yitzhak.
Superb restitution of the unchained sea coming to strike without slackening the pier. Splendid colors of the sea and the pier with its rusted aspect. Very well done Yitzhak.

  • Great 
  • taivo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 709 W: 5 N: 460] (1840)
  • [2004-03-14 8:19]

Very dynamic photo. I like the changes in the color shades of the sea: from dark blue to grey/white. I also like how you captured the waves crushing against the pier.

I was in the mediterannean in Israel last Saturday (6 of March 2004). I think it was one of the most ideal days of the year for bathing in the mediterannean in Israel (The weather was not too hot, there were waves) - Allthough most of the locals don't like to bath in these weather. I think it is only their own loose !

Hi Yitzhak.
Your picture is very nice, it contains a good theme. I like the speed to take this one, is very clearly and really the water looks great.
Congratulations!
Please, try to make critiques to me...
Sergio

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