Photographer’s Note
Indramning, as it says on the store here means framing (not as in cheating, but as in putting frames on pictures). I was standing at a busstop yesterday, waiting for a bus which didn't come (my bad, I was at the wrong stop), ao while I waited I shot some people walking on the opposite street, I mostly did it to kill time, but then I thought this one could work for TE, because the ladies scarf has the same colour as the letters and it does show a typical street of my city...
PP. Added more motion blur to the woman and added grains. Oh, and cropped it + and indrammede det.
Rinie_Hoff, nwoehnl, bpelvan, lestans marcou esta nota como útil
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nwoehnl
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(120) 2005-11-21 15:44
Hi Line. There is a genre of photos on TE that I tend to like a lot even though (or perhaps because) I hardly do them myself, and this photo of yours falls into this category. Good frame with the motion-blurred woman walking past the front of the framing shop. Her yellow scarf echoing the writing is indeed a good touch, and I also like the "gorilla" poster on the door. The grains are nice as well and accentuate the "urban" aspect. Nice work.
Rinie_Hoff
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(9334) 2005-11-22 3:28
Hej Line, I started an intelligent critique yesterday, but I don't know what happened. With a tabbed browser, I often hop from one tab to another, and forget what I was doing. So I mught have closed it when I went to bed, VERY late.
I like it how the shop is below street level for a prt, it makes the woman stand tall. The poster of the goriila is funny, but the one that is hanging below is even funnier, that could be a photoseries you, working in your lab, with a white coat and capcap, injecting your rats.
Clever PP, as she's giving dynamism to this shot. have to try that once too.
RGatward
(19749) 2005-11-22 3:41
Great observation, and excellent PP. I liek the movement caught here, and clever idea with the shop title, added to theme. Just come back to update, amazing that such a fine shot still has so little credit. I really can't understand TE sometimes.
jrj
(34779) 2005-11-22 4:56
Hi Line
Good to see you on local grounds - hopefully with functioning films/cameras.
I like this street shot from Århus. Tight cropped compo. Good motion effect and use of the colours as the yellow in here. (Also a bit fun reading the poster on the door with the headline: Gorilla - coincidence?).
See you around :-)
bpelvan
(3786) 2005-11-22 13:35
Hi Line,
I feel as if I'm looking at a scene from my country. A perfect PoV with the motion blurred lady. The colors also seem so natural. Good capture of a moment of the daily life. Thanks for sharing...
Regards
Bulent
Jeppe
(18623) 2005-11-24 16:39
Hi Line you surely framed her (or could I be wrong ;-)
I like your framework as well - and yes the motionblur which gives a feeling of action on a little grey day - thanks for a fine job.
ALSOM
(6616) 2005-11-27 3:35
Hi Line,
Good way to kill time ;o).
I like the composition, withe the strinking yellow color from the writting and her scarf.
Lovely motion blurred.
I could see 'Gorilla' on the door. Any connection with one of your 'Gorilla' shot ?
TFS, Al.
cgrindahl
(6109) 2005-11-28 14:35
It appears your time in the jungles of Equador has stirred your blood Line... how else to explain this sudden burst of color from the maiden of the north. I've become accustomed to a more muted palette from you, especially when it comes to frames, something that came slowly and late to your work. I'm not complaining mind you, especially as the first effects of a California winter arrive with darkened skies and occasional rain. Rinie will be pleased to know she won't likely see too many kids in short sleeves playing in the sunlight for a few months... ;-)
Good choices here and fine post processing. Seeing the angle at which this was shot I can imagine some of what you must have done to give us all there horizontal lines. You have a good eye for detail and a fresh view of the world that I greatly appreciate. Keep up the good work!
lestans
(15486) 2006-03-21 8:27
There is something that intrigues me: Perhaps the blurred girl in the right, and the low shop door in the other side. It is really a good compo, and good idea to blurr more the girl.
Ciao!!
Livia
Photo Information
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Copyright: Line Tscherning Damgaard (Burnham)
(2426)
- Genre: Pessoas
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2005-11-20
- Categories: Vida Diária
- Camera: Canon PowerShot G6
- Exposição: f/3.2, 1/80 segundos
- More Photo Info: view
- Versão da Foto: Versão Original
- Tema(s): Shop fronts [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2005-11-21 9:46
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