Photographer’s Note
Yesterday I uploaded a picture from the same area (no. I) and received four lovely comments (thank you Constantino, Mesut, Linda and Carlos), but this morning, when I looked at it, I was not happy and pressed the delete button. I hope you still speak with me :)))
Nevertheless, I had over a hundred looks in just a short time but only four comments so I asked myself, is TE just a “let’s be nice” website or was my picture so boring for too many and nobody cared to tell me? Lately I find the times when constructive ideas came from other members are over and replaced by “we love each other”. I am similar, I don’t blame you, we all get a little tired to tell others what to do. Oh I don’t mind actually, I love to hug you all. But I did get a critic from my working colleague who has a good talent when it comes to the arts (never ask her to organize something, you never find your stuff again … LOL). She said about my yesterday’s picture “cut some sky and you are fine” … as easy as that. I will post it again but a little later I guess.
Anyway, I won’t repeat my yesterday’s text but I was in Wendover some weeks ago, a place where speed records are meant to be broken, each year in August, with all sorts of crazy vehicles. It still had some water on the lake but some areas were dry. It better gets dry for speed week in August, I guess this would be the real treat to visit. This is another pilot in my picture, maybe not trying to break a speed record but taken in by this strange place as many others the day we visited.
If you are interested, I can strongly recommend the movie “The World’s fastest Indian” with Antony Hopkins in the leading role. A dear film … and you will fall in love with the salt flats but also with Antony, he plays heavenly.
Or I also highly recommend Hannes Schmid’s webesite (a famous Swiss photographer that is in love with the Toggenburg area as much as me). He has filmed on the Salt Lakes (see Formula 1 section). Thank you Brigitta, Miriam and Hannes for bringing me to this strangest place that is so beautiful.
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avene
(10806) 2009-07-02 7:12
hi Barbara,
I wanted to comment on the previous photo, but when I opened the page, it was gone :) I did like the feeling of huge empty space it conveyed, but I had three suggestions - the person was too centered for my taste, I think horizontal format would have worked better for the feeling of emptiness, and I think the photo could use some white balance adjustments, the salt looked a little gray.
I think some of those comments apply to this photo as well :)) I would try and brighten the salt, but I realise it's a tricky balance to avoid overexposure. if you don't mind, I'll try WS in the evening, to see if I can show what I mean - the salt must've been blinding white, and I'd love to see that in the photo as well. but here I do like the vertical format and centered composition :)
best,
Kristine
sevy
(12783) 2009-07-02 7:16
Hello Barbara,
I did not see your previous shot, but this one caught my look. It really makes me thinking about the bolivian salt desert Salar Uyuni I had the luck to visit.
I was not thinking the salt desert in USA were so similar.
The human presence is a major point inside the frame, but perhaps put too much in the center.
I would have also said the silhouette could have been better visible if not put on the horizon border, but I think you would have like to play with the human making a link between the ground and the clouds; so similar in the white colors.
Whatever, for sure an interesting shot.
Yves.
ribeiroantonio
(21693) 2009-07-02 7:18
First, the line at the end of the salt pan. It is almost horizontal but still need a 0.15deg CCW rotation!!!
Second, a find the horizon a bit too central but it my personal view.
Third, the general view is magnificent and the soft colours are beautiful adding a sense of something at the end of the world.
Overall, it is a nice shot and I like it very much. Reminds me the night I spent in the middles of a salt pan in Botswana. Well done.
Antonio
sacavem
(8014) 2009-07-02 7:40
Olá Barbara,
A splendid well presented snow scene.
Excellent composition, very nice colours, and sharpness.
Regards,
Filipe
zeynepe
(9328) 2009-07-02 7:45
I confess I am also an inactive TE user Barbara :)
I definitely like the simplicity of the approach. Anddd "Formula 1 section" is so exciting I wish I were him :)
Congrats and enjoy your day,
Zeynep
Nicou
(43605) 2009-07-02 8:21
Hello Barbara,
Qeulle image, ce minuscule eprsonnage dans cette immensité arride, , le format avec les deux plans est grandiose, vraiment la classe.
Merci et amitié
Nicou
mesutilgim
(36126) 2009-07-02 9:50
Halli hallo liebe Barbara !
!!!*****?????**** !!!
Na ja Du weisst was ich meine ! Aber dennoch; ich will nicht widerholen was ich schon einmal gesagt habe aber hier ist die grosse "Einsamkeit des Menschen" noch deutlicher !
Noch einmal danke schoen und
beste Gruesse
aus dem "schmorenden" İstanbul
MESUT ILGIM
ciakgiak
(9932) 2009-07-02 13:11
Hello Barbara,
You can also talk about rules in the composition of images, central subject or not, the rule of thirds etc.
But I think that first of all, the photo should be instinct and freedom, what I see in this beautiful image.
I like the central horizon line and the subject at the center of the image, very beautiful neutral colors and the magical atmosphere that you are able to create.
I love this splendid scene :-))
Warm hugs
Giorgio
jonathan_hart
(22562) 2009-07-02 16:45
i'm not a rule of thirds tyrant, and i don't suggest you to do so on this picture, but the perfect 50-50 is quite disturbing me after a long minute to watch this (my first thought is "wow")
and this is a matter of tastes and intentions...
(i would see it quite in the middle but not a perfect 50-50)
the place is amazing, and the presence of the silhouette (with a TERRIFIC pose captured), it's so simple and efficient, i just may say congrats!
jc
gneufeld
(14957) 2009-07-02 18:32
Hi Barbara,
Effective minimalism at it's best! I had to look a few times to get the idea here, but I do like the power in simplicity. Cool shot and TFS. GErald
BennyV
(4415) 2009-07-03 0:45
Hello Barbara,
Simple, minimalist and effective composition. There's no place for the figure, except right there where you put him/her: smack dab in the middle, between sky and earth...well, salt.
An interesting place...and since you got more than 10 comments now, I hope you're satisfied with our turn-out? (It would be interesting to see your deleted post/version, the one with "only four comments", in a WS.)
Enjoy the sun.
Benny
phwall
(5384) 2009-07-03 1:22
Hello Barbara,
Personally I liked your other photo better than this one. I was about to comment on it when, "poof", it was gone. So let's let the "love in begin".
I've read all of the comments re composition and I agree with all of them, there are pro's and con's with regard to the composition split of 50/50 it is just personal taste in a photograph like this. If I had my druthers, I think the person is just too far away to have enough impact, I'd have liked to see him about halfway closer to camera, it wouldn't have taken away from the vastness of the location and you'd be able to make out what he's doing.
The other point for me is the colour of the salt itself, I'd like to have seen it a lot whiter. How much would you have paid for a blue sky!!!!!
I was in Wendover in 1975, in those days it was a sleepy little town with 100 foot gravel verges on each side of the road, clapboard buildings with wooden verandahs out front. Halfway through town though there was a big white line painted across the middle of the road, this was the border between Utah and Nevada. On the other side of the line there were bars, night clubs, casinos, restaurants and 15 meter high neon cowboys pointing to the casinos, it was a real wild west town. Those Mormons sure knew how to party.
Have a good weekend.
Warm wishes
Peter
Dyerco
(8800) 2009-07-03 7:04
Hi Barbara
I like the equal weighting of land and sky. It gives a real sense of vastness. The fellow adds human scale as well as a focal point. It says he is the center of the universe ?? No maybe not. Nicely done.
Phil
MarianneS
(14262) 2009-07-03 8:45
Hello Barbara,
As far as I am concerned, the first reason why I post a photo is because I like it, very often because it is associated with a good moment or souvenir.
Perhaps it does not respect the rules (of course, I don't know them;-) but I don't care.
Of course, when I receive no comments, I wonder what's wrong with my photo. But at the end, because I like it, I think it still deserves its place in my gallery... And if the other ones do not like it, I think it is a pity because they cannot 'feel' what is in my photo.
Let's come back to yours. I did not see the one you uploaded yesterday, so I have no idea why you received so few comments.
I was surprised when I saw this one because you centered your subject and you put the snow and the sky 1/2. It is not what I woud have done, but still I like your photo, which gives me a great feeling of immensity. This person, looking at the sky and showing it with his/her hand seems to tell us to look higher and higher!
Regards,
Marianne
rlrad
(1187) 2009-07-03 11:17
Hi Barbara,
You didn't break any of my rules - I don't have any! I liked the one you posted yesterday, just didn't have any time to critique it. I actually liked it better than this one since it had a bit more detail in the foreground and the person was larger. I think this one actually makes a few new rules, myself. Like the rule of "Hey I like this" and the rule of total and complete balance - it is very balanced.
It is a cool image no matter what. You could get a copy printed six feet tall and put it on a door - then it would look like the door opened to the Salt Flats!
Have a super weekend!
Reed
crhieatt
(5143) 2009-07-03 22:50
Barbara,
I've not been out to this location - yet - but I'm always impressed by the stark photographic potential of the place. Also, impressed by "The World's Fastest Indian" - a lovely, warm, film, and a great performance by Hopkins.
I like the composition, and he pose struck by your willing model - we should all have a willing model in our camera bags - maybe I'll design an inflatable version for the lone wilderness traveller! :)
This shot does have a very cool, almost icy feel, probably at odds with the actual envirnoment. I'm guessing, just guessing, that it might have been hot!
Failed to reach you on your mobile yesterday - but I'll try your land line at a decent hour.
Cheers
Colin
aadilj
(17950) 2009-07-04 5:34
This is wide and stark and creates such a lovely feeling inside when i watch this Barbara. I like the image.
and have you visited my site yet?!!! www.aadiljamal.com
Waylim
(10623) 2009-07-06 11:41
Hello Barbara,
So here is it, if not knowing where you were, I would have think it's another winter scene from sitzerland full of snow. I love it, in some way, there is a similarity to my images from Death Valley of the playa, except instead of dry earth you have salt and there are similar patern on the salt and the distant mountain and cloud. the person add perspective of the scale of the place. My only minor criticism here is that the horizon is a bit too center as well as the person. In this case I think the special element here is the salt plain and I would have like to see more of it. I'm sure you have it some where in your memory card. You're just saving for later. I do like the texture of the salt plain and its patterns. thanks for the note and infomartion. Have a nice evening.
Way
gunbud
(27435) 2009-07-06 21:25
Hi Barbara,
Wonderful simple image of the vast salt flats.
Loveley rich textures to the slat with fine depth broken up by th edistant hils and lovely soft blue sky.
The person adds nice scale to this unique image.
Regards, Tom
Wanda1
(10832) 2009-07-17 9:49
Hi Barbara,
Hey, I did see that film and it was great!
So this is where it all took place. I always find it quite difficult to get some detail out of white surfaces, so I can see that your exposure here was quite good to get some of the textures of the salt which I like whilst also getting a good result in the sky. This certainly gives a feeling of vastness and emptiness and the person definately helps with that.
Regards
Wanda
Angshu
(33155) 2009-07-22 22:54
Hello Barbara
Your minimalistic shots have served as my inspiration in my recent visit to the sea shore. In fact I tried the very similar type of compo. used used here with lots of FG, leading lines & the tiny person. When I post them, I have to dedicate to the Mistress of Minimalism & I have to remember it. Have seen the film & Sir Hopkins was too good there. Fine shot with a great & enjoyable note as always!
Best Regards
Angshu
kensimage
(8539) 2009-07-25 18:22
Nice composition, Barbara! A great way to capture the vastness, especially with the person reaching for the sky. Nice to have those mountains on the horizon, they're important in providing something besides straight lines. I'd like to go to the salt flats one day.
Perhaps you could cut 1 or 2 cm of sky so the horizon isn't centered. Ideally the light would be from a low angle so we could see all that nice texture, but you're there when you're there.
Regards, Ken.
darek1978
(11020) 2009-08-01 14:27
Hi Barbara,
An amazing compostion full in poetic flavour. I'm impressed with the atmosphere of this photo. Fantastic light and brilliancy. Well done!
Best regards,
Darek
Photo Information
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Copyright: Barbara Kehl (baba_flies)
(7873) - Genre: Lugares
- Medium: Cor
- Date Taken: 2009-06-14
- Categories: Natureza
- Camera: NIKON D 300
- Exposição: f/8, 1/500 segundos
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- Versão da Foto: Versão Original
- Tema(s): hooooo!!! [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2009-07-02 6:45
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